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Ashley's Smile by MornaStar

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honestly, i think if you are going for a picture specifically of ashley's smile, it should be more of... well, his face. there's a lot of un-needed background space. the focus of your picture is of ashley's smile so i think it should be him filling up the picture. i'm not trying to be rude or anything but that is my honest opinion. also the picture is just a bit dark around the face area. i think the focal point could be a little more well expressed if the image was made a little more clear. but once again this is just an opinion.
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MornaStar Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heh honestly I wasn't looking for critiques. It's always set to on, but thank you for your critique. I came up with the title after I fixed it up in photoshop. Perhaps I could throw it back in there and try again. :)
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milovedeathnote Feb 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
oh haha ^_^ well i'm glad you took it the right way
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MornaStar Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm an artist lol. Artists know how to take criticism.
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